Year 3 Reflection

Friday, August 28, 2009

Editing...


One free choice activity this week was editing, you can write it into your books or add it to the blog here.

Happy blogging :)
Mrs O
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6 comments:

  1. jasAugust 29, 2009 at 9:24 AM

    When the bear family returned home from a walk they found that their home had been broken into. They rang the police and Constable Chudleigh came to to inspect.

    Constable Chudleigh had to write down some notes. He asked the bear family many questions and looked around for evidence. He told them too go stay at their grandmas house until the investigation was finished.

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  2. JackAugust 31, 2009 at 10:25 AM

    The book that i am reading at the moment is Captain Underpants and the perilous plot of
    Professor Poopypants.The Auther of Captain
    Underpants is Dav Pilkey.The type of story in this book is not raal.It is very funny when George and Harold mess up the teachers.
    This story is set in a school and on a bus trip.
    George and Harold put paste all over the teacher's clothes.

    My story has a message and it is to have an imagination and make up stuff.

    I think other people should read my book because it is funny when Professor Poppy pants says his name in front of the class.

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  3. CourtAugust 31, 2009 at 5:50 PM

    When the bear family returned home from a walk they found that their home had been broken into. They rang the police and Constable Chudleigh came to inspect.

    Constable Chudleigh had to write down some notes.He asked the bear family many questions and looked around for evidence.He told them to go stay at their Grandmas house until the investigation was finished.

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  4. NICOLASeptember 1, 2009 at 7:16 PM

    EDITING
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    When the bear family returned home from a walk,
    they found that their house had been broken into.They rang the police and Constable Chudleigh came to inspect.Constable Chudleigh had to write down some notes.He asked many questions and looked around for evidence.He told them to stay at their Grandmas house until
    the investigation was finshed.
    NICOLA
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  5. NickSeptember 2, 2009 at 8:34 PM

    When the bear family a walk they found that their home had been broken into.They rang the police and Constable Chudleigh came to inspect.
    Constable Chudleigh had t wright down some notes. He asked the Bear family many questions and looked for evidence. He told them to go stay at their grandmas hhouse until the investigaton was over.

    NICK

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  6. Mrs OSeptember 10, 2009 at 7:33 PM

    Great editing jobs everyone!

    I think it was great that you made the effort to write this on the blog as it is often harder to type and worry about correcting all the mistakes!

    Can anyone see differences between these posts? Maybe you can realise that you made an error? This is a great way to continue our learning!

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